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  1. #1
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    The Day That The Ball Stood Still: An NBA Ball Hog Story

    http://gambleguru.sportsblog.com/pos..._day_that.html

    Hey everyone, I'm just posting this to see if I could get some feedback on this fiction sports story towards making other ones down the line, would appreciate it!
    Where Pick n Roll...Pick and Roll...Pick and Roll...Rebound Happens

  2. #2
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    Seems you went a long way to move that last one-liner :P

    It made me smile a bit, I think it could use more build up/introduction
    save the drama for your mama.

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