Hmm I like most of the players brought in but:
Don't think Neise will come so cheap. Vitters would have no place there, and Lake as one of the top three pieces in a deal for a good pitcher is hard to imagine.
I want to avoid Delmon Young like the plague unless he's extremely cheap. One of my least favorite players and prospects everz.
Three FAs, one Delmon Young and another a reliever, is going to be a little light.